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Reply LuckyDucky, June 29th, 2014, 11:17 am

@126ArtSoul: thank you =D haha and I hope so too. Good luck with your comic as well =D

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Reply LuckyDucky, July 1st, 2014, 12:28 am

@126ArtSoul: I only saw one chapter but so far so I can't say much about the story, it seems like a pretty solid start. It leaves the reader with some questions, and I'm quite intrigued by the brother. The rest of the story really depends on how you spin off it.

The panels go pretty smooth, backgrounds show obvious effort and detail. The characters themselves are also very expressive. Each scene has various angles, which I like.

There are some awkwardness in certain angles of the faces and anatomy issues. And as for the speech bubbles, I feel like the text is a bit too close to the edges of the lining of the bubble. Also I personally do not think the font works too great for a comic.

So to sum it up, I think that the start of your comic is solid, the setting is quite interesting, the plot depends on how you make it from here. The anatomy has some issues but if you work on it, you will improve. =D

Reply LuckyDucky, July 4th, 2014, 12:12 am

@126ArtSoul: Nope no money lol.

Discussion:

Reply 126ArtSoul, June 28th, 2014, 2:17 pm

The story was getting good, I wonder who is going to stop him from hitting the ground. Anyways this story has really caught my attention and I hope the story can keep growing. On a side note would you mind taking a look at my comic, Osana: The Land of Greed? http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=142948

Reply 126ArtSoul, June 30th, 2014, 6:43 pm

@LuckyDucky: I saw that you became a fan of my comic, thanks for taking time out of your day to do so. What did you think of it?

Reply 126ArtSoul, July 3rd, 2014, 2:15 pm

@LuckyDucky: You can actually find out how the story develops by purchasing the first Vol of Osana: The Land of Greed. http://www.lulu.com/shop/kazuki-takamura/osana-the-land-of-greed-vol-1/paperback/product-2 1697032.html

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