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Reply LuckyDucky, June 16th, 2014, 5:48 pm

Anyone feel like the pacing is rushed or anything? If it is tell me. Or if you're EXTREMELY confused.

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Reply LuckyDucky, June 16th, 2014, 6:23 pm

@YukixKaname1: Thank you T_T Haha. Yeah this flashback took place before the accident. And I'm glad the main character is loved lol. He's pretty annoying lol.

@Virtrue: Ah, thanks haha. If at any point you do though, please let me know. I think if the plot doesn't have the flashback shit stuff and is more linear, it wouldn't be confusing, but imma just go with what I want to do. So I'm glad you're okay with being confused xD

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Reply YukixKaname1, June 16th, 2014, 6:08 pm

@LuckyDucky: Thank you so much for the update~ I love this comic so far, yayyys~
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No, no. The pacing is alright nothing is rushed at all! But, the only problem is for me trying to fit together all the flashbacks [puzzle pieces] in order like a puzzle. But, that's a good thing! It's always best trying to figure out something by yourself rather than someone helping you, but help would be most appreciated. Makes you feel like you accomplished something. So my guess is that was a flashback to what happened at the accident or something? And this is before all of that - like wayyyy before. Anyways, I gotta say. I really love how the story is going so far and how it played out. It looks absolutely wonderful. It has a creepy vibe and chill towards it, but that makes it just as good! And the main character is also coolio too. I love him so far and toots a cutie~ Ohh, also your art style is the best as ever~ I see you put a lot of thought it and it turns out just perfect. Keep up the good work! ;D

Reply Virtrue, June 17th, 2014, 9:08 am

I don't find it rushed, I think that the quick pacing really helps give this sense of urgency and 'oh no what happens next'? Also I kinda like the confusing aspect of it ('course thats probably cause the books and stuff I read REALLY confuses people) because then you're not just reading it, you're interacting with the story, piecing it together and making it work in your head. It makes it more gripping and enthralling, y'know?

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